Here's those doodles - possibly the dude could be the prototype for the leader of the bad guys? Dunno where if at all the other two would fit.
Very nice. I liked the girl on the left - the way how she looks, her sight resembles Morevna very much. But Morevna have a different haircut. The main part of her hairs laying close to the head. But on the right side she had a long lock. I mark direction in which hairs falling with red arrows. Then painted over.
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And also I missing eyebrows in your artwork, so I added them. Remember, that as her right eye is closer to us, he must look a bit bigger than left. According to perspective. I suppose you tried to copy the nose from my animation, but (oh!) nose was not a strong point there. ^_^''
I also liked the dude on the left. He is too cool for the gang leader, but I think he could be a third Ivan's brother-in-law - The rocker.
Generally I liked the propotions and the main tune of characters.
Slightly confused about these bad guys: soldiers and bandits are very different things, and I don't know what 'look' you're going for. I'll wait until the plot's released in English.
I'll try post some ideas managed in graphical form tomorrow. ^_^