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 Post subject: Re: GSOC 2012
PostPosted: Wed Mar 07, 2012 3:36 am 
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I fixed two minor typos:

insure -> ensure (we're making sure something happens, not issuing an insurance policy)
envolvement -> involvement (the word 'envolvement' doesn't even exist)

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 Post subject: Re: GSOC 2012
PostPosted: Wed Mar 07, 2012 3:48 am 
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First and foremost, we are certain that our mentor and lead developer is incredibly commited, as he has demonstrated by his many years of service.

Oh my God, that's embarrasing! 50% of my commits are just merges and typos! :-P
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 Post subject: Re: GSOC 2012
PostPosted: Wed Mar 07, 2012 3:58 am 
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I've made changes on the submission Form according to some of the suggestion from Zelgadis.
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 Post subject: Re: GSOC 2012
PostPosted: Wed Mar 07, 2012 5:16 am 
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Thank you, everyone! Are we ready to submit?

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 Post subject: Re: GSOC 2012
PostPosted: Wed Mar 07, 2012 5:45 am 
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Zelgadis wrote:
HI!
My comments on edits:

nikitakit:

For my taste the phrase
"We are a community of developers and animators focused on developing"
sounds better than
"We are a community of developers and animators centered around"


You're probably right, but I'd like to avoid using word "develop" twice. Other options are a "community of programmers and animators focused on developing Synfig" or a "community of developers and animators working on Synfig."

Regarding the rest of the changes: short and clear is good, sounding too formal (like I tend to) probably isn't.

I suggest keeping your version of the answers, but make a revision such as the following:
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What is your plan for dealing with disappearing students?

We ask students to provide their email and phone number to the project administrator. Our mentors will maintain regular contact with students throughout the summer and let them know that we are always available to answer questions and provide guidance. If a student disappears without notice, the mentor will contact him/her via email to clarify the situation. If there is no reply within 3 days, the administrator will phone him/her personally. If the student cannot be reached, the administrator will contact Google and report the situation.


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 Post subject: Re: GSOC 2012
PostPosted: Wed Mar 07, 2012 5:54 am 
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Zelgadis wrote:
Thank you, everyone! Are we ready to submit?


Before we submit, I'd like to do a last round of proofreading/spell-check and also make sure that our Ideas page and Application Template are correct.

My suggestions there are:

Ideas Page
A good page should provide a short description of each idea, conveniently in one place. The links should be for additional/detailed information only

Application Template
The purpose of the Tasks section was to inform applicants that they should introduce themselves to us and be able to compile the code before they apply. (See answer to the question about how we will retain students). Otherwise we may receive an application from a student we have never even talked to, who filled out the form and thought no other action was required. I pretty much copied that section from the Inkscape application form -- but I agree that it probably needs to be presented in a more suitable manner.


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 Post subject: Re: GSOC 2012
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nikitakit wrote:
You're probably right, but I'd like to avoid using word "develop" twice. Other options are a "community of programmers and animators focused on developing Synfig" or a "community of developers and animators working on Synfig.

I see now. I haven't noticed two similar words. ^_^"
Other option is "coders", but it sounds like slang.
My suggestion is to leave with "developers".

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I suggest keeping your version of the answers, but make a revision such as the following:
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What is your plan for dealing with disappearing students?

We ask students to provide their email and phone number to the project administrator. Our mentors will maintain regular contact with students throughout the summer and let them know that we are always available to answer questions and provide guidance. If a student disappears without notice, the mentor will contact him/her via email to clarify the situation. If there is no reply within 3 days, the administrator will phone him/her personally. If the student cannot be reached, the administrator will contact Google and report the situation.

I like this one.

nikitakit wrote:
Before we submit, I'd like to do a last round of proofreading/spell-check and also make sure that our Ideas page and Application Template are correct.

OK, I will wait for your edits.


nikitakit wrote:
My suggestions there are:

Ideas Page
A good page should provide a short description of each idea, conveniently in one place. The links should be for additional/detailed information only

Application Template
The purpose of the Tasks section was to inform applicants that they should introduce themselves to us and be able to compile the code before they apply. (See answer to the question about how we will retain students). Otherwise we may receive an application from a student we have never even talked to, who filled out the form and thought no other action was required. I pretty much copied that section from the Inkscape application form -- but I agree that it probably needs to be presented in a more suitable manner.

Good for Ideas page.
I think it's ok to go without Tasks section. Student can apply, but that doesn't mean that he is approved.
According to timeline:
6-20 Apr: Mentoring organizations review and rank student proposals; where necessary, mentoring organizations may request further proposal detail from the student applicant.
So we will have enough time to compile/prepare/review student. And acceptance decision is taken by mentoring organization (us).

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Zelgadis wrote:
nikitakit wrote:
You're probably right, but I'd like to avoid using word "develop" twice. Other options are a "community of programmers and animators focused on developing Synfig" or a "community of developers and animators working on Synfig.

I see now. I haven't noticed two similar words. ^_^"
Other option is "coders", but it sounds like slang.
My suggestion is to leave with "developers".


I'm not clear which version exactly you want, so I'll leave it to you to decide.

I'll do the edits for the other questions right now.


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 Post subject: Re: GSOC 2012
PostPosted: Wed Mar 07, 2012 6:23 am 
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By the way, are the questions up-to-date with this year's form? I've looked at other projects' answers for past years, and there are variations. I believe the original wiki page remained from a previous year, so I want to make sure everything is correct.


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 Post subject: Re: GSOC 2012
PostPosted: Wed Mar 07, 2012 6:30 am 
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nikitakit wrote:
By the way, are the questions up-to-date with this year's form? I've looked at other projects' answers for past years, and there are variations. I believe the original wiki page remained from a previous year, so I want to make sure everything is correct.

No worries, I did updated for the questions of this year. ^___^ Thank you!

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 Post subject: Re: GSOC 2012
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nikitakit wrote:
By the way, are the questions up-to-date with this year's form? I've looked at other projects' answers for past years, and there are variations. I believe the original wiki page remained from a previous year, so I want to make sure everything is correct.

The questions of the Form are updated to 2012 version.
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 Post subject: Re: GSOC 2012
PostPosted: Wed Mar 07, 2012 6:48 am 
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Main form looks good for me, unless anyone else can spot a problem. On to the ideas page...


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 Post subject: Re: GSOC 2012
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For me Application Form, Student Application Template and Ideas page are fine.
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 Post subject: Re: GSOC 2012
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I edited the idea page to provide a short blurb for each proposal. I don't think we have to be any more fancy than that -- but if we want to add any other ideas (such as some of DaveJ's suggestions), we should do that now.


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 Post subject: Re: GSOC 2012
PostPosted: Wed Mar 07, 2012 7:21 am 
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nikitakit wrote:
I edited the idea page to provide a short blurb for each proposal. I don't think we have to be any more fancy than that -- but if we want to add any other ideas (such as some of DaveJ's suggestions), we should do that now.

Excellent!
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